the flow of this poem is so sultry, as waves on the beach at sunset. people all around stop to watch in silence. the author is definately captivating his audience.
reading aloud brings each reader, each imagination, a different experience. the words can be descriptive yet vague and sensible and senseless. as reading, deeper and deeper falling in the words and the rhyme. swaying back and forth emotionally, as though to feel the same way as the writer must have felt at that tie in that moment.
line 6 describes the central cedar pole. this can be thought of as the "rock" or "anchor" that holds the tent in its place or the soft touch and beautiful aroma that is encompassed by the surrounding tent, or woman.
to think deeper, and to read aloud again. this just might bring a heightened sense of understanding in such readings.
Curtis- thanks for your post- I really appreciate your incite- and it helped me to really be able to feel the poem with my senses- instead of jumping into analysis.
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